Whilst the individual verse idea for the first direction of the “Mist from the Mountains” sketch appeals to me, the multi-stanza idea is developing beautifully, creating unique poetic opportunities of its own: internal rhyme, rhyme scattered across stanzas, subtle and overt literal and visual alliteration—all the joys of lyric poetry! I, therefore, lean heavily toward the multi-stanza idea for the poem’s first direction, but will develop the individual verse concept nonetheless—who knows what other opportunities I may encounter in the process!

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